Hmm…interesting. Definately something new. I’ll keep watching.
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Can’t wait to see where this goes. Nice job on a start!

wow a story about a blind kid. You really dont come across many of those. Nice work. Definately have potential for a series. No question about that.

he is blind oooooo
like I said with stovohobo if everyone was blind beauty wouldn’t matter, and it shouldn’t.

Ohh, very nice reveal as it gradually faded into that fact. This should be a very good series. Nice emotion and thoughts of the kid, too. Blindness, though obviously a disability, has its own romanticism of how they see without their eyes. Great.

HAHAHA , I have sightless eyes too!

Oh, he’s blind. I read the sequel. I’m not blind, but close to it. ;)

Oh, now i see the braille typewriter. I’m such an idiot with bad eyes!

lol NISY .
As Stovohobo said, I liked how the fact that Tyler’s blind was gradually revealed to the reader. Very nice.
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Very well told tale,the blindness wasnt obvious from the start, just an ordinary angnst filled kid.. all the more poignant because of his bitterness of his sigthlessness. bad enough being a teeanger w/o such a handicap.

wow. I really like it! Nice job!

i love his inner monolouge! I can’t wait to read the rest of this series. i bet this story is going to be very interesting, cool, and unique. a blind boy as the main character is a great idea.