great job on this. i love how you described the feeling and comfort that he couldn’t give her. && i love this sentence And even then, it doesn’t feel like enough.:) Freedom
Very nice. I like the visual of the jeans with the patch from the dress.
You can tell that this person really cares about her, and wants to be able to help her. Great job.
So much detail, so much lovely, wonderful, satisfying detail you put in your stand-alones. Great job.
Freedom
Pat J
Saint Chuck
Stovohobo