Cute run through of a day through the mind of one truly love crazy. Oh, I mean “like crazy”. After all, it’s only been one date, right. Funny stuff and continuing on the cute vein of the other pieces.
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Very cute and realistic. Reminds me of some of my friends. Chuckles reminiscently.

I was a little taken aback when you sequeled, but it’s no big deal. With the creative commons and all. But you do an amazing job with adding things to my serieses. I don’t know how Overlooked_Merchandise feels about, but feel free to sequel any of my work :]

Sure misses haley.. sweet, and anytime you(stovo) sequel something it’s always seemless, like the original author wrote it. and it’s flattering when you do a sequel.
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I must agree with what Kermit said Stovo! nice job. ((you have 8 periods a school day??))

I agree with Kermit too! and like usual amazing job!

srry i haven’t commented yet…buuuuut
nice job writing the sequal, i agree kermitgorf if goes so well with the series. i thought never explain accurally wrote it and i was just about to sequal…then i noticed who it was by!! great job
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very fun and descriptive. i loved how he mentioned art class. how could the teacher think he belonged in special ed? that was so ignorant of her! oh, and i thought the bit about the french fries was cool, and how he could hear her breathing from across the room. wonderfully written, and great use of details.