Great conveyance of his insecurity and nerves. I like it.

Poor guy. That shampoo line never works.

I hope a boy never tried that line on me…….unless he’s famous lol jk

you should try the eye routine…

Nice story that awsome its amazing.

ouch what a bummer

Such a sad sad man,yet I feel forhim and want wish him successs. an original character you created Phil. loving this series. and its point of view

I DONT GET THE ENDING

but good story (:

good storyline, but didnt he change his name..? Im confused