This is so cute!
Please continue!

Hilarious stuff. Everybody needs a friend like that. I love the line about third grade, classic stuff.

Very believable. Russell sounds a little like a friend of mine.

haha….thats funny

I love it and I love the 3rd grade mention

true friend and 1st rate wingman. Funny dialogue.
Awesome as always, congrats again on being featured, You Rock!
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He sounds way too much like my friends…
except they’re girls. But oh well. Can’t wait to see what happens and I’m curious about third grade.

I loved it. Russell is classic and the dialogue is fantastic and witty.

Oh, but maybe you could clean up the sentence, you’ve gotta get learn to tell the difference between…

Hmmm.. it sounds lke the boys at my school. My mom calls some of them vultures. Hehe, some of them are. Congrats on gettng featured! it is a really good story!

Congratulations on your featured ficlet! I found it quite entertaining. Great job!
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Congrats on featured! Really cute story with very natural-sounding dialogue. I really like this. Nicely written.
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Wow, featured already? I was only away for a few hours!

hahaha dudeee this is sooo cute and totally sweet!! zomg!
and of course its already featured. YOUR STOVOHOBO FOOL !!

i love the title. lol. and i love the 3rd grade refrence

Nicely written dialog. Great work, Stovohobo!

- Yoda

i love it!

loved the dialog, and grats on being featured. =)
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Awww, poor boy. Congratulations on being featured. I love the whole realistic feel, people can relate, and I like that; it’s important.

This is great. I’m really enjoying this.
I swear, you must have sent cloaked spy-drones back in time and observed me…

Good story, with good believable dialogue. I enjoyed it. Congrats on your featured!

i wish guys were that shy at our school.
aghhipuff.

cute story.. and it was featured. Good job! I have always loved your stories. I must say, I am a fan.

Ilove it….. everyone else already said it…. great dialog…. and many ppl can relate!

congrats on getting featured!!! :)
great dialogue, yes i know i sound like an echo…
keep writing!
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