Very descriptive. It’s similar to my school dances.

I’d go with dream.. nightmares don’t get that good…

Sounded like a heck of a dream to me, and I’m not even in school any more. Brings back memories though of so many school dances, so many awkward moments, and a plethora of ruined opportunities. Some days, it’s awesome to be a grown up.
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You’ll notice I usually try to avoid these middle- or high-school drama things, seeing as they are almost always the same. I’m just trying something different, though. If you don’t like one of the installments in this series…well, I probably don’t either. =)

LOL ! Its great! Stovohobo!

Dream most def. Sounds like my dances

Go for the dream… sounds like dances i’ve been to

OMG ! I love these stories! Please continue!

I like that last line. Perfectly descriptive of the confusion and utter terrifying qualities of falling for someone. Very nice, Stovo, even if it is a tad out of your element. You have conquered yet another genre, O Master of the Ficlet.
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Everyone’s been saying dream, but really, Storykeeper of Fae said it the way I imagined. Confusing and utterly terrifying. That’s why he would ask himself if it was a dream or nightmare.

yeah I would have said nightmare too because he’s confused and he kind of seems like this might make him uncomfortable if it was actually happening..very nicely written as usual..

very nice as always Stovo. I think it could be considered both actually.. dream because he gets to dance with this hot girl, but nightmare because he obviously can’t dance and I’m sure doesn’t want to embarass himself..
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haha! I just noticed something, “Pillow Lips” FORESHADOW !

Haha very nice, the story made me smile. Continue and I hope once more with 5 stars

This is so platonic and very cute, please continue, I would like to see what happens next!

Very beautifully written..
You have a fluid style of writing that’s amazing and a story line that is easily relatable.
Congrats on being featured.

Great. Just plain great. I’m hoping for more. This tale has really caught my attention.
The central character’s name wouldn’t be David, by any chance, would it? Then I’ll know you’ve been spying. LOL .

lol keen13!

_{disconnected. hip-hop. beats. you’re asking for it.}

Kyra! OMG ! That’s my dog’s name. hahahahhahaaha=]

OMG …. sounds exactly like my dances….. very good…. very descriptive…. love it!

Please write more!!

Do you mind if i sequel? sorry if it makes you mad.

Okay, maybe I won’t. I kind of just…
I don’t know really. I just can’t think of anything! And it’s annoying me to hell.

ahaha, this character is definitely one of my friends.
greattttt ficlets. :)
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Cute I liked it a lot.

morrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeee !

dream he probably likes heryet a nightmare cuz of russel

Dude both Dreaam cus of Kyra Night mare cause of the russell lol