You gotta give me credit for not actually living in the 80s. Eh? A little extra comments, p’raps?
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Awesome! Small grammatical correction – where you write “whose ever,” it should read “who’s ever” instead.
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Oh, and props for writing this while not actually having been alive in the 80’s. Coulda fooled me!

nice job. I liked it. =). but i’m in the same boat as you, I wasn’t alive in the 80’s.
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i was and don’t know those songs lol. props to you stovo for a coherent fantasy .. Yoda/Luke skywalker type situation.
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Nice job. I like the Icarus reference, and you can never go wrong with Queen.

To not have been born in the eighties, you did well to pick one of the songs (“Broken Wings”) that could ver well be said to define the eighties sound. Nice!
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Excellent job! I like the fantasy spin on the eighties.

Hooray, hooray, hooray for Queen. I almost used all Queen songs for mine. And not just any Queen but slightly more obscure Queen even. Very nice, and a neat interaction on top it, a moment not usually depicted, the struggling dark apprentice.

Awesome!

This coming from another person not alive in the 80s…very nice, this could definetly become a sequel.

I lived through the 80’s and I like your story. I was thinking you would use “Abracadabra” at any moment. Great magical story.