I’ve seen that picture before and often wanted to write on it. I’m glad I didn’t – your story was much better (not to mention funnier) than anything I could have written. LoA
Give yourself more credit, Yoda! (OK, that sentence was unexpectedly funny.) You are really very good with dialogue and make it sound very natural and life-like. This could’ve been a conversation between my boyfriend and me … minus the “skid marks.”
Crappy if you ask me. Yuk, yuk yuk – and yes, TXH , I’ve been accused of having bizarre, off the wall thoughts and words before… : ) Thanks fo reading & commenting.
This is actually a good writing exercise with the whole:
He She:
dialog back and forth thing. OK – impromptu challenge for others to write their own HE / SHE ficlets – go forth and do good work!
Haha – though not your best work (I can tell it’s one of those things you crank out when you just need to write) – I thought it was still very good. And it made me laugh. And frown in slight disgust. And raise my eyebrows in slight amusement. Any ficlet that can trigger that many reactions has to be given some credit. =)
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