Oh my gosh! I was not expecting that!! Nice twist.
LoA

Me neither, how sad!

I thought she herself was sick, but I could see the shadow of death hanging about somewhere. I thought you were going to kill the love interest off. I have troubles with romance…making it work…I typically end by killing someone, having a huge fight followed by time and sand, or a peaceful friendship. I’m intrigued by where you’ll take this.
LoA

good job.
sequel ?