Sometimes it is taken to far. This is a very good sequel to the challenge. You inspired me to do this challenge.
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Great job on this. I love how you described the thought that he pondered that she might not be back again. Well written. Let me check out this challenge.
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great job!

I love how you manipulated the intro. Nice work

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That last line helped make this a five star ficlet. Excellent work.

i like this..you did a great job on it.