ooo, a nod to the armed forces, nice! I like that the character expresses his or her change and now is a new person. Great reflection!
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Lovely depiction of the counter-point to the whole sentiment that recruits are suckered into the service. I’ve certainly seen a good number of people like this, god bless ‘em.

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I like the idea, but it feels a little rushed. Sorry.

Maybe it was a bit rushed. I kind of just put this idea down since she said use all of your ideas. My other one is better I think.
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i like this one.. and it’s a good idea.

I like it =]
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I love the last line. =) And it was goo even if it was slightly rushed..
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well generally fights are rushed so I wanted to give that impression. Hope it isn’t to much rushed.
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