I like the rhythm of this. Lovely poem.

Gorgeous! I was trying to use that photograph, but couldn’t come up with anything half as good as that.

I love how it’s so minimal, and yet you can draw so much of a scene from just those few lines.

I really like this. It sounds like a typical falling star poem, but then you throw in some different things. Very emotive.

thanks so much!

I really like this! It does sound like your typical falling star poem, but you added emotions and I’m sure anyone who read this can relate! Great job!