Nice! That sounds like a situation my wife would lead me into! Cool story.

Glad you enjoyed it.

Love the story.. suits the picture perfectly.. which is beautiful in its own right. Nice job!

Sweet moment.

This is so playful and yes, sweet. There is no other word but sweet.

very true amazingly sweet

It goes along nicely with the picture – I can picture it happening there. I like the inclusion of the “city boy” thing.

Lovely sweet story. Proof that the reward is worth the journey. Well done.

Wow. I leave off checking in for about a month and lots of comments. Thanks everyone!!!! Glad you liked it.

Aw this is really cute.

HAHAHAHA , KINDA FUNNY .

beautiful picture.
sweet story.
romantic setting.
nice job.
=]

Thanks everyone for your wonderful comments.

wow I just saw this. it’s really well written and I like it alot. =)

romantic yet daring

That made me smile!

I read this some time ago, but couldn’t think of the right thing to say.

Very nice!

smile I like this.

I love the rythm of “he balked.She teased. He caved.”simple elegant language. Very evocative.I

Thank you everyone. I’m glad people are still discovering it and enjoy it.

this is just so wonderful and sweet

This is so cute and really really sweet. That seems to be the word everyone is describing it with. “Sweet.”
FIVE STARS :]

It is truely sweet. You can feel there love.
LoA

I removed my sequel. Carry on with your story. Very nice.

Yep. The “she teashed, he caved” part was what got me. Nice piece of work, that.

Very sweet, and loving. Great job!

aw that’s sweet, um, like everyone else said.
haha, city boy.

Wow. Thanks everyone for reading and commenting so much. This story is staying in the Most Popular stories section of Ficlets. I’m humbled. And enjoying the sequels.

I love it! I think it’s sweet, but if i could sum it up in one word, i’d say stunning…

claps good. :)

I love it!! Especially the last line, it’s so teasing and cheeky.
WELL DONE !

nice. very sweet. i really liked it

I must agree with everyone. Very sweet and great use of a beautiful pic. Also great writing.

dazed…it was really good. very romantic

very romantic. sweet. love it.