I really enjoyed this and have written a sequel. I hope you like it. I think you were probably going for something way more symbolic, but it’s just something that came into my mind after reading your piece.

This is quite awesome. A fantastic last line that really gets to the truth of the situation, and it’s said so matter-of-factly.

Hmm…very thoughtful and thought-provoking statement there at the end. They’re the ones who are on the ground to roam the earth, but are they really free? I must read on! Hi ho, silver!

Wow, this is fantastic, from the beautiful descriptions early on to the moment of discovery at the end. I look forward to reading the rest of the series.