“Oh, just shut it before my eardrums commit suicide.” Where do you get this stuff?? And I approve of your use of the dash—it’s my favorite tool available in the english language. Awesome story, well done.

Excellent dialog you got going here. I love the “fly on the wall” aspect of it all. We walked in on an absurd situation with people who are fun to listen to. Reminds me of what I enjoyed about John From Cincinnati, people who are good at expressing themselves through dialog conversing with each other.

thats funny, this story really makes you want to know more.. More about David, more about the situation… there better be a sequel or I’M gonna commit suicide!

thats funny, this story really makes you want to know more.. More about David, more about the situation… there better be a sequel or I’M gonna commit suicide!

Very amusing to picture this very polite and proper cat-burglar of some sort (?) and some poor bedraggled police lieutenant.