For some reason during the first read I imagined the legs as literally being ‘on fire’. I did not sleep well last night I guess.
Well written, really gets the confusion the character it feeling across.

ya, its very well written. i definitely want to see more.

I read this and I think of a psychic of some sort “seeing” a serial killer or murderer (the word again makes me unsure if its the dream again, or another murder).

2:04… 5:04… coincidence?
nice job with this, you used really good descriptions.=]

Very intriguing ficlet – makes me want to see a sequel
~or write one myself – ahem. ~
Will this happen to her or to another? Intense.

Exciting.. dramatic.. suspense ful..

ohh, scary.
good descriptions.
LoA

Very exciting, with lots of little details, and, a gender change? I dreamed I was a Japanese woman once. At least, I think I was Japanese. Go figure.

Thanks for all the great feedback everyone. I truely appreciate it. And a great sequel by Stovohobo too. My first story that has an unsolicited sequel! that’s just awesome.

Thanks again.