I like the way it fits the original because she asked if she was lgonna die or be in a coma, so it really would depend. Great sequel. The Wonderball itself kind of reminds me of the Golden Compass.

I like the way it fits the original because she asked if she was lgonna die or be in a coma, so it really would depend. Great sequel. The Wonderball itself kind of reminds me of the Golden Compass.

I LOVE THE GOLDEN COMPASS (book not movie)! Just had to get that out of my system. I agree, it does fit quite well. Really great job of continuing the story. I like how it showed a phrase instead of numbers, keeps the idea of magic going.

I agree, it fits very well, you have an eye for detail! It also gives hope that she won’t die, not that a coma is a good thing, or the best alternative.

The magic ball continues to give non-integer answers even though it was dropped. You did a great job of continuing a magical story.
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Great continuation. Reminds me of that moment in a horror or fantasy movie where everyone is still on the fence about the possibility of something outside the norm.

I agree, fantastic sequel. What’s a magic ball without “it depends”?

Excellent job fitting this into the original

Wow! this could really go so many ways! Awesome job!

Sequeled!

Good stuff as always Ana.

Wow. I would flip out if that happened to me.
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This is awesome!!!!

oh!! thank you for the sequel! this is just as good as the first! =)
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Last night someone showed me a few minutes of Final Destination 2, so I might still have that ugly feeling of bad acting when they’re like, “No, this can’t be happening. I don’t believe you. Pshaawww.” So that’s still in my system when I read this. I liked it though. Good writing. =)

Great sequel! It fits the prequel exactly!=]=]=]=]

Loved the sequel too! It can be a series!
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Great sequel to a really intriguing story! I’m anxious for more…
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So this was pretty much amazing. Ok enough commenting, I’m off to read the sequel.
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OHH CRAP . thats so scary. this is amazing. love it.

the star of the story kind of…confused me but the ending was wonderful i like the suspense.

ooh thats creepy. this is awesome. ok, now off to read the sequel…

Great sequel! The creepiness remains! :)

Positively chilling. I’d hate to be in her position. O_O