Haunting and, I imagine, quite realistic. Junkie Philosophy 101. Great job conveying the hopelessness and self-loathing. Refreshingly good mechanics that need only minor tweaking.

mechanics schemantics i like it i wish i had four arms cause i would give it four thumbs up, plus i could really juggle good but that is besides the point good work/

mechanics schemantics i like it i wish i had four arms cause i would give it four thumbs up, plus i could really juggle good but that is besides the point good work/

minor tweaking is too kind….maybe three or four rewrites followed by a trip to a souless blackhearted editor who sharpens blue pencils with the teeth of community college creative writng students

Ha. Well, as much as I’m a stickler for editing myself, I don’t think it matters as much on ficlets. Sure, it would make it more accessible and look nice. Anyway, this gets all the five stars I gave every other one.

Anything worth doing is worth doing well – ficlets, or not. Also, please tuck yourself back in, showmeyourwits; “dey’z hanging out”!