To tell you the truth the second paragraph almost gives it away, but then again I have two kids and know how my wife felt during her pregnancy. Good job

All the details add up to the final realization. So I don’t feel surprised. Then again, I’ve been there myself twice. :)

Worst. News. Ever. =P
I’m with the others here. It was more of a realization on her part than a twist. I still enjoyed the little story, and think you did a good job with it though. I liked the idea of “separating herself from her dreams.”

Whoops. Forgot to say, thank you for entering my challenge.

I had a feeling it would end up like that. Still the build-up was quite nice.
One of your sentences here is a fragment:
Moments like this, where she mentally clears her head and begins her day.
Normally I don’t mind fragments, but this one was a bit jarring.

This was well written! Nice job. I liked this one. =)
LoA

I noticed you changed a few things :) Now THAT would be unexpected!

Wow, that’s some twist ending. I like her casual morning routine, the mentaly clearing her head part, and the unexpected end.You write in the here and now, as though we can see it as it happens.

Fairly substantial changes here. Adding the hysterectomy definitely gives it more of a twist, and I think you cleaned up a few other things. Overall, great job of editing, taking the suggestions of others, and implementing them into your story.

Well, I didn’t read whatever it was like before, but I love this version! Excellently done.

Yeah I agree, this is a cool story, and a shocker!

I’d call that a good, slow twist. Or sort of twist-over. The hysterectomy sort of nips the pregnant theory in the bud, but then it comes back later.