Wow. did not expect that ending at all! It just goes to show that we need to be more patient with in life and not jump to conclusions.
One tiny correction: where you write “Your right,” it should read “You’re right.”

Ouch, ouch and yeeks. Great twist, brutal and unexpected. Helps that I opened the ficlet and by the time I read it I’d sort of forgotten it was associated with a challenge. How did you get tiny text, btw?

Thanks Ana, I’ve fixed it. And THX I believe I hit ” ~ ” and it went _tiny =)

Wow, heartbreaking twist. Sometimes even friends can be cruel.
You missed one more “you’re” correction in the third to last paragraph.

I’m with THX on the ouch and yeeks.
~ makes subscript text (_subscript), ^ makes superscript text (^superscript) and + makes underline (underline)

Great Ficlet! Especially with the twist.
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And thanks for the underline hint Pyro.. I have been wondering about that forever.

I can’t imagine a worse feeling than the one Cora must have felt at that exact moment. Or the one the friend will feel after she realizes what a jerk she was. Heartbreaking twist.

Man that is a foul on the play, you cant tug at my cold heart like that, this aint Amastad (good movie by the way i cried like a baby) how can you just go and do something like that i had to call my mom and tell her i loved her. i dont like you stop making me sob or i am going to…..i dont know..Something. P.S. you are a big meanie face.

Jeesh T_M~JY.. It’s just a story.. this hasn’t happened to me.. I wasn’t the friend or the girl it happeed to… I’m glad you told your mom you loved her.. but I am not mean for writing a story like this.. At least I do not believe so..

This is sooo sad, and depressing. I’m glad you would talk to me if my mom died.