Hauntingly beautiful, like so many of your pieces, pens, and what’s amazing is that this is a response to my silly challenge. I could spot just a few of the clues (i.e., The Sound and the Fury), but the rest are very well disguised.
If your song is Existential Blues, then you just jumped up 200 notches in my book. This is one of the best entries I’ve read. I now feel ashamed for posting that tripe of an entry. This is probably the coolest line I’ve read in a very long time: “The waves crashed against the rocks, and if you listened closely, you could hear them cry.” It’s just an amazing image.
@Pens, Oh well. It’s an amazing song though. I prefer Mr. Bungle’s version to “T Bone” Stankus’s though. Was I at least correct that “field of poppies” related to your song choice? Also, I think Jen meant to type 1989 as your birth year, but got confuzzled when thinking about 7 as your fav. number.
I’m not sure where the ‘87 came from, because when I re-read the ficlet.. I actually “saw” it as eighty- nine… weird. My brain is on override today. :/
Wow. If I didn’t know better, this could stand alone perfectly and no one would ever know it was part of the challenge. I, for one, am too afraid to enter, just because I really don’t think I can hide them that well in 1024 characters.
♠Ana Cristina♥
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