interesting, and there is hope for love, yet an unwillingness to be devastated again…

Omg, this is really good. Maybe love can triumph over what has happened. I always wanted to give a guy the key to my heart.
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aww and its even sweeter knowing that its a true story =]

It’s interesting to think what made that blackness, or what happened before. Nice story.

intriging! i like where this is going even though we don’t know what happened before!!
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Awww! I enjoyed that thoroughly.

Interesting beginning. I like the first few lines in particular.

Great start to a story. I like how so much about what happened before is left unsaid at this point. Definitely sweet with the key to my heart comment.