I think this is more of an event that happened after something.. so feel free to write prequels about how she got to this place and more about why she ran away.
this could go oh so many places; with prequels or sequels. anyway, i think the emotions of the character were portrayed nicely, and you gave just the right amount of information to the reader. =]
suspensetaken
One Time, One Chance
One Time, One Chance
suspensetaken
Stovohobo
Laine the Grey
Writer4Life00nj
Mighty-Joe Young
Mighty-Joe Young
RunningWithScissors
RainDance
Mistress Elsha Hawk