Sorry but I’m pretty sure it was a girl they kept thinking about.

i agree with the above

Wait the character is a guy? lol my bad

it’s ok, I am sure people still get it.
LoA

Um, now it’s a guy the narrator’s thinking about?
You’ve got some errors in this: it should read “supposed” and you write “his his face” instead of “is his face.”

Okay sorry everyone, I messed things up a bit. I tried fixing it, if there are still any errors just please tell me! Sorry for the mistakes :(

Okay sorry everyone, I messed things up a bit. I tried fixing it, if there are still any errors just please tell me! Sorry for the mistakes :(

Ooh, very nice and poetic.