Is this a true story? I liked it.

yes, its a true story, and thanks for the comment and rating

The emotions in this ficlet are portrayed beautifully. Your not holding anything back. Great job.

This is really good, it portrays all your emotions in a great way. Nice work (:

This is really good, it portrays all your emotions in a great way. Nice work (:

sweet and sad at the same time.

I liked it too, but if you want more people to read it, capitalize your Is and and do a bit of grammar check. It is just a sejestion, but if you copy and paste it into Microsoft you can to a quick grammar check. I don’t give my stars on grammar, so..
LoA

its tough what ur going through keep you head up and stay strong. this was really good writing i liked it alot keep it up