I like it! Ancient and dust-covered books always pique my curiosity.

Creepy i wonder what will happen next!! Keep going!!!

Thanks. I will.

“Klaatu… Verada… Necktie… Nectar… Nickel… It’s an ‘N’ word, it’s definitely an ‘N’ word.”
Or is it just me who imagines Ash fighting with the Book of the Dead here?
This is very cool. Love the Twilight Zone tone of the whole thing. Well done.

Great job on setting up what figures to be an exciting epic story! @ John Perkins, the same thing flashed into my mind when I read this.

Oh this looks like its going to be a very exciting series! I can’t wait to read the next part. (Btw great job with the title :) )

haha, I think everyone will read this just because it says not too.. but it deffinatly deserves to be read!

OK, you know you are encouraging readers to click on this based on the title alone. ;) But it’s actually a neat little story. It can go in many different directions, should someone wish to sequel.

If nothing else will make people read a story, this title will. I love it. And I swear I had an idea to write something like this just a couple days ago.

Yes, the title lured me in as well!

This could be very interestingly developed.

The title of this ficlet was inspired by the title of another ficlet, by l.m. orchard entitled “This story should not be popular”

hahaah i love the title.
it’s sort of like reverse psychology.=]
very compelling (i can never use this word right) story, i’m off to read the sequel!
=]

Yup, the title got me too. Very nice ficlet, mysterious and intriguing.
LoA

ok.. i’m hooked now.