This was really good! Thanks for entering my challenge! It’s really cool that you hand wrote, and hand drew your own comic books. I must try that one day! Very descriptive, very nice job!

I loved the last line.

That was awesome.

And I know what you mean about slightly shallow characters in your first couple ficlets!

When I read mine, I want to erase them…

I tried illustrating a comic, but the only thing I can draw consistently is fish… LOL
Actually I have tried to create odd creatures for a story, but I have to work just as hard at drawing as I do writing. I find it’s sometimes double the work, but good for writer’s block!

Fun, I know I’ve read some from that series. Glad you’re working on your creativity here on ficlets.