i can’t believe there is so much that can come out of that pic your mind is amazing elsha.

I pictured the character the same age as Renton from Eurecka7 if you have kids ask them who it is lol. hey the good thing about writing with someone is there is always someone who will comment.lol the other writer.hehehe

Excellent. This is going to be a grand series.

Wow. Dragons are amazing – and to combine it with a farm? Excellent.

Another great entry. The last line really played up the hopelessness of the situation well, and gave us yet another villain.

I kept Kira, and made him older.

or…. I guess since I didn’t use names….I could still keep Kira a little bro…..

Elsha you are brilliant. All of this came out of the pic at the beginning? I couldn’t have done that.

wow, i completely agree with John and MBTM !

I love it, wonderful series!

damn elsha were you just trying to make people cry….try to focus more on the syntax and the way you entrap the reader that is how you really draw tears….
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So sad…

The poor kid has had too much trouble in his life already. He deserves his dragon!