I am laughing. This is great! Love the conversation!

Short, but sweet. I like Marduke as a name for the dragon. Was it inspired by Marmaduke, the giant great dane from the comics?

Love it! Especially the intelligence of Marduke, and how big he is now. :) You put such a comedic spin on my somewhat sombre tale, Madorian.

I’m busy tonight, and most of the weekend, I’ll get to a sequel soon!

And I guess Kira is officially the only protagonist, a male, maybe just out of puberty, having to use his muscles on the farm. :)

no john, are you messing with me? its marduke from the babalonian story of creation. wait you know this and you are messing with me huh?

You mean Marduk? Nope, never heard of him or the babalonian story of creation. I usually stay pretty far away from superstition.

Jon you know it wouldn’t be style if i spelled the names correctly

Nice name. I’ve forgotten the whole babalonian thing but I like the name and the conversation.

haha. wow, i love the last line!

wow, absolutely love the last line!

Good job [: