Hahaha!

Way to turn some random, slightly disturbing ficlet into something worthwhile!

The last two paragraphs were great. For a second I thought she would take pity on the poor puppy…

How very sick and twisted. I like it.

“Burn it.”
I agree with both above comments, I’m glad you could take something poorly written, add to it, and kill off the characters. I couldn’t have asked for more.

HOLY JESUS ! these storys are… undescribable. (not in a good way)

wow. this is written alot better than the last three. good job taking the story in a not as demented direction

I’m with RainDance. Thanks for killing off the characters. Although I hear the German Shepherd is still running around…
By the way, in your second to last indentation, the “it’s” doesn’t need an apostrophe.

hahaahahha that’s hilarious.
i loved that.
very disturbing series.interesting.
sequel it.
i want to see what else you have in store for this dog/human?
(gag)

Ya this is a little better but still…gross.

Ya this is a little better but still…gross.

You have a sequel that I think finally puts this thing to rest.

i applaud you.
=]

This was a fun spin on a poorly written series of ficlets.
Continuity: The father wasn’t a German Shepard, it was a Great Dane.

wow. don’t burn the poor thing!!

no! dont burn it!!

noo dont burn it!!

noo dont burn it!!

reminded me of Eraserhead…