I picture a Forrest saying “And that’s all I have to say about that.” at the end there. :) Great picture, Great story! Wondering what kind of work she did? Hm.
That picture always makes me open my eyes wide. (I have no idea why.. it’s weird I know.) Love the story! Pigeons are sneaky little critters, always gathering about where people are. Great opening!
I like the combination of a zany character plus the two characters talking about her. It adds an extra layer rather than just describing her outright. The last bit also added nicely to the mystery.
this is cute. i really like the similes in it. :) “personality bigger than Elvis on a 3-day donut binge” <- thats the most amazing way to describe it in my book. this picture is really great too :D good job. 5 star++++
I like the little dialogue that sets it up as a conversation. And yes, that picture made me look twice just to see if those were spools of ribbon hanging from her ears.
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