I like the existential flavor of the whole piece which is highlighted by the text message reply: “Are we ever really anywhere?” Great job! Five stars (if the ratings work again).

talk about depressed!

gah! i love the line ‘are we ever really anywhere’! now… how to continue…

Great comeback for the text. Unique portrait of sturm and drang channeled into one of the most unhealthy breakfast foods ever invented.

I think I would be sick after the first two meals of poptarts. Blech. But what I wanted to say was, nice ficlet.

You’re like those movies that are hidden at the back of the rental place, the ones that no one ever hears about, but turn out to be the quirkiest, funniest, all-around awesomest movies ever. Yeah.

This is really cool, i’m off to the sequel!