Sad. Touching. Unfortunately what some kids go through. Music can help a lot, though, and it seems to do just that with many. Good job. : )

I like how its told plainly and in present tense. You take the kind of desperation or fear we’ve either experienced or heard about many times, and made it into a nice short story.

Yeah, I think nearly everyone has felt not good enough at some point in their life. Way to take the feeling and put in down on… well, not paper, but you know what I mean. :)

You’re good at expressing your feelings through words, and that is what makes you a good writer, love…