huh. i like this. alot. intreging, yet… simple… nice job =)

very good set-up! I like the voice you’ve used.

interstinggggg.

Sorry it took me so long to start reading this, but I am catching up on my reading now. better late then never. Awesome start! Reading on.
LoA

nice start likeing it so far

oooohhh i think this is a really good beginning.