Nice job continuing. I like that the bigger questions get put off due to more immediate concerns. Happens all too often and keeps your narrative grounded.

ah, alternative universe! yeah, the rain is pretty bad wherever they are.. probably best to move now, talk later…

“You are here. Where else would you be?” I love that line! Beautiful dialogue here.

I agree with g2. Definitely my favorite line.

Oh, yeah. Brilliant line. Nice approach to the story as well. I agree, the immediate far outweighs those ‘larger’ questions we’re looking for.

I like all the little lines sprinkled throughout.