Okay, real life situation with a newly discovered theme song stuck anachronistically into the situation. I’ll be honest though, that was kind of tricky to do. The song is ‘Rambunctious Boy’ by John Fogerty, definitely worth a listen if you like CCR . And if you don’t know what CCR means, give it a listen anyway…cause I said so.

Love it. The song in the middle of the dialogue could have been cheesy, but here it works really well. Good job!

mm troubled rambuntious boys stuck in Misissippi.. can’t be good.. well the ficlet was sure good. Fit with the song.

Who said I was troubled? I mean, sure, I may have been. But still…I didn’t come right out and say it.

Awesome entry, and way to weave your own experiences into it. Also, the lyrics seem to fit right in. Thanks for entering!

The actual dialogue was simple, but the lyrics just made it come together in a much deeper way. Awesome ;)

i totally agree with what everyone else has said =)

Love it! Two sons against one mom.. been there done that.. Yep, I won my round too. ;) Great scene and great song.