Are you moonin’ me?

This is a very creative direction to take the story. I like it!

Excellent piece, but um… “My parents were so proud as they watched with tears in their eyes…” Okay, ‘rents watching their little girl get it on, that’s a tad sick… voyeurism taken a bit far.

Yeah, sick was what I was going for. Any more sick than the cannibalistic consumption of the flesh and blood of one’s god? Well, yes, obviously, but I’m trying to make a point here.

And the point is you are one sick puppy. And bless you for it.