Heartwrenching story, very well written.

Little confused here. Did u mean she ‘poured’ out her relief?
Also the last sentence is a little odd.

no, i mean pulled out

Aww. Sad, but very good. Nice job.
LoA

So incredibly sad, and so beautifully written. The emotions and torn feeling were captured wonderfully.

Thanks. i was listening to “The way she feels” by between the trees and it kind of triggered the story in my mind

awe, sad yet beautiful… and scarily true for some… nice job capturing her emotions!

interesting, very sad wat this horrid world has come to
(national serious day for me)

This is sad, but very well written. It’s a good story, too. Nice job [=