make a sequel!!!

I enjoy how the visuals (eyes flicking, a basket of kittens, orange line of horizon) evoke more than images: anxiety, warm comfort, and cold empty distance. I also like that we don’t know for sure who says the last line. Well done.

That was beautiful.

awww! That’s so sweet. i loveee it!

I love this. its really good and I love the visuals of the sunset and his eyes. And I like how you put lyrics to Hey There Delilah in the story.

I’ve always liked your stories. This one’s no different.

how sweet

Wow, thanks guys! To be honest, this isn’t one of my favorite Ficlets. But, yes, I love Hey There Delilah.