FREAKY !!! That is one freaky ficlet! (It’s good, though.)

Wow. (and you have a lot of tags on your ficlet.)

Creepy….Intriguing….Maybe I’ll write a sequel..not sure

Woahhh, lovely twist at the end! Fabulous!

whoa ahh wha! im like dude and they’re like ahhh! please go on with this!!!