Hmmm. This leaves me curious as to why one would be imprisoned for life due to “accomplishments.” I like it! Very compelling.

I like the flow of the dialogue. Leaves me wanting to know more.

thank you both! (and I noticed the use of the word “accomplishments”, I think the interviewer might have had a lack of a better word. . .I don’t know =)

lol i love the it!. conversations like this is wat makes me nosy. lol when they get as interesting as this one u just wrote, that is wen u will find me eavesdropping by the door…

which is a good thing!! i would love to see more like this from you!!!!!

Thanks! I’ve been trying more dialogue lately, they’re fun!

Coooooooooooooooool… but y did he get a life sentence… was it for punching the guy in trhe face

Noooo….be quiet I’m still working on it myself! ;)

lol. it sparks my curiousity…good job.

Thanks! I like it when someone discoveres an older ficlet and comments. I don’t know why, I just do. :-/

Sparks my curiosity too. Keep it up.

your great with writing dialouge, love the sarcastic wit! he should be put in solitary for his Ad -E – Tude. cant wait for sequels.

You should try your hand at playwriting, your dialogue is fantastic.