Oh my gosh, I love your platypus analogy. This one’s probably the most realistic (that can be good or bad, it just depends on how well you integrate the words into the story). Anyway, I can’t vote or rate unless nobody votes by August 19th!

Thanks Stovohobo!

I totally gotta five-star this one. You deftly handled all of the keywords, and still managed to craft the start of a great tearjerker!

Thank you!

this is beautiful. i love the platypus analogy the best, but i also love that none of it’s forced- the required words flow w/ everything else and i love that