A good ending. Makes one think what would have preceded it.

It has a note of finality to it, which I like. Quite a few in the challenge do, but some are missing that. It leaves a whole story open, but it’s still somehow enough.

Has my vote thus far.

Haha, this, for some reason, made me laugh. It seems like a good introductory and conluding statement.

Foreboding music- duh duh DUH

I laughed too.

Fade to black, gunshot SFX , THE END .

I love this. LOVE this. It could also make for a great beginning. I sort of picture the “thinker” sitting in a cell/coffin/bottom of a well looking back on events that have already taken place.

Hahahahahahaha I laughed. It’s aptly named. Great job.

lol, this is hilarious! Great job!

So great, and surprisingly complete, for such a short sentence! Fabulous job!

Says so much with so little, and still manages to please.