haha this is good very funny & well written

dun dun dun.. lol. I like how this just dawns on him.
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Always a piece of string…though I haven’t hear the sardines one before. Nice touch.
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It’s been edge-of-your-seat all the way through. Can’t wait to see what happens next…

Yeah, the sardine line was a funny one. I can feel for the poor guy at the end there, unsure of anything and everything.
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suspenseful MacGuyver esque. LoA

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It should be “AM I the next target”. This isnt exactly ur best series, but its higher than my level of writing, so props.

Also Vichte Tigers is a douche bag, yep a big bag of douche.