This was just weird enough to be funny.

Agreed.

I had no clue what was going on until the end!

i just thought a sequel from the bullet’s point of view, would be just my style.lol

Now that was different. ;D Great job, of course. At first I thought I was reading about a robot, then I had to read through again to figure out S&W was, (duh) Smith and Wesson. ;) I should have known that the first time through. I’ll blame it on the early morning Alabama heat. _shrug

The first time through I thought it was about a robot assassin or something like that, but I get it now. Kind of cool to write from the bullet’s perspective. I liked the CLICHINK PACHOW sound.

i love how six is envious of his friend who has seen all the action and the as it turns out he is really inside of his own self (accordinging to the prequels and sequels) the thing in which he envies most. what a wonderful twist and also what awonderful annunciation of how we feel as humans and what we secrectly hope for ourselves expressed in the robot.

this is VERY good.. man..

Funny enough, after the first few words, my thoughts were, “I am not a number; I am a free man!”

anyway.. very very good.

Unique and simply fantastic.

i was so confused, i though u were saying u were another type of pan at first lol…

but once u get it it’s really cool. nice!

haha wow! that was funny but really good! i will have to say like everyone else that I didn’t get it at first, but I get it now. I havent read alll the prequels yet but I will. haha (thanks for the date-rape comment….?) XD

Once I got it read it again, I was like “that is really cool.” I usually don’t go for the “write from a (fill-in-the-blanks)’s perspective,” but you did this one really well. Like a stream of consciousness from a bullet.

I always like stuff written from the perspective of inanimate objects.Even more so when they are deadly.

very strange…

Wow this was really good when i got to the end cause that was the only part that really made sense! I LIKE IT !!!