totally did not see this coming! it’s nicely written and flows well. I like it alot!

Wow! Shocker! Very good though, I’m sure nobody would of seen that coming! Great job!
LoA

Very well crafted. I was definately unprepared for the end as well, but I found myself pleasantly relieved that she wasn’t breaking it off with him. :]

Beautiful language deftly getting all the emotions and feelings across. Love the humorous twist at the end too.

Zoinks!