Haha, nice sequel.
I love the part when she’s like “But the closest place is probably too far, would you rather go for a wa?â€?
Awesome job :]

it’s love at first sight, lol! I love the inner monologue, berating himself.. good job!

lmao. this was really good. even though I haven’t read the begining prequels.

this so funny, i love it, i think im starting to believe in love at first sight now.. lol
great story!

This is really funny. He’s talking to himself in his head. Is that better or worse than out loud?
:)

Wonderful! I love it. Thanks so much for sequeling my work so that the characters can live beyond the limits of my own imagination.

Hilarious. Would you like to get a coff somewhere? and the ensuing internal diatribe were well worth the price of admission, but her response takes the cake. Now, I have to check out the rest of the series.

Haha, too funny. Sequel, please [=

hahaha. Inner twerp. Nice. I’ve got one of those. lol.

I love the different personality she has. Saves it from being just another romance story.

POWER TO THE WOMEN !

lol

ps. i like how your one chapter in our little impromptu series has become one of the most popular on ficlets all of a sudden.

…just sayin’. ;)